Cut the amount of Tax dollars given to them. Used to, it seemed like the cops drove around with 2 in a car. Now they have their own car that they can take home with them and they want to gripe about not getting paid enough even though they get paid off by drug dealers.

I wonder if anyone will understand this question.

the rain slowly drops on my face and the sun slowly sets on my eyes. waiting for me to never let go again waiting for me to un shield wat is with in. to never let the fear out of my sight to keep promise in my eyes.to hold my breath and count to 10 and hope that it will all be over again. to ask and learn and not to ask and not care. to love with my heart to love beneath my soul never letting the tears drop down because i am strong enough to hold. to discover the things iv never seen before to put that smile on my face and hide that grin away because i don’t need it no more. to see what i been waiting to see to uncover my eyes to wat is within me to unleash the power of the sun and set it free to be mad no more because that is not me

Really good! But you could format it more conventionally, and maybe cut it down a bit, something like:

Rain on my face, the sun sets on my lies.
Waiting for me to keep promise in my eyes,
To hold my breath,
And count to ten,
And never let them win again.
To unleash their power,
To set it free.
And to not be mad,
Because that’s not me.

Any opinions or criticism is welcome.
I have been trying to think of a plot line to write about for a small while, have a list of what i wanted to be in it, but no storyline for it. I recently have thought of one, and was really in love with it and excited about it at first, but i tend to change my mind easily- which is where you come in, give me your honest opinion about my main plot line as far as i have gotten it so I can know if I should keep it or move on. Thanks!

Thousands of years ago the earth( she has a partial conscience) sealed away a being of great power within her. The being was not one of evil or destruction, b, but actually one of good- wishing no ill or evil among any. The being had was so powerful he could erase any evil form a person, any evil intentions or thoughts, which meant they did no evil, only good. but the way this was done is the person would loose the ability to choose what to do, (loosing their free will, conscience, agency or whatever you wish to call it) but always doing good and right. ultimately the earth prevented this by sealing him away, and the following generations had lived on free. centuries went by and an intinteresting discovery in the relationshiphip between mana and magic was made.
Magic is cast from using the mana of the earth, as is well known, but consequently the mana from the earth can’t be replenished, and as the mana was taken away to form spells and artifacts, the seal the earth had placed on this being weakened. a great effort was made to stop and erase magic form the world, all tomes lost or destroyed, wars made, in the end magic was abolished from the earth, and the seal stayed in place. after the war a faction was in placed to oversee the seals strength, and to stop or prevent magic from being used.

Story takes places a long while after magic was abolished and the faction in place to oversee the seal discovers that it has been weakening exponentially over the past few years, and main story revolve around the faction( maybe just a number of members) and their exploits to stop whoever is trying to weaken the seal and unleash a being who would bring peace to the world.

the edges are still a little rough, but that’sthe basic idea- both protagonists and antagonists are good, yet on different sides of a philosophical viewpoint. I would really like to hear (read) whatever anyone has to say

very interesting……"their exploits to stop whoever is trying to weaken the seal and unleash a being who would bring peace to the world."

i would read it ….keep developing your idea ; ]

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